This is our re-shoot of our 180 degree angle rule video. I am much more pleased with the outcome of this video as there were massive improvements made compared to the last shoot. As we had better equipment such as a canon compared to an Iphone, as well as we used a tripod so that the camera wouldn't shake which enable us to create more creative shots. When George edited this video he used much less colour correction however he did place a luminance mask over the footage giving the footage a cinematic feel. However George did end up changing the last shot on the storyboard as the camera was not stable enough to make the last shot look good, therefore making our whole video downfall. He did try to use a smoothcam on it however it did not seem to improve anything, therefore he gave it a jittery feel because then the rule is broken.
Level 3: 37/60
ReplyDeleteYou just about manage to include all the criteria asked of you, including a SRS and the ability to demonstrate the 180 degree rule. What hinders the effectiveness of execution is your setting, which serves to be more restrictive at this stage in your filming ability; nevertheless you do manage to achieve this. What must be addressed is the use of the camera, and in particular holding a shot steady. Throughout there are a few times when the camera moves and hinders the engagement of the audience to the tension on screen. There are some good varieties in distances and angles, with movement being attempted, but not wholly effective in its execution. Further to this, the editing of requires further attention to detail, considering how the length needs to be more consistent across a series of shots, further enabling the tension to be conveyed successfully. Good use of dialogue and non-diegetic sound and external space, showing some success in the execution of match on action. I would have liked another shot added in the movement to an exterior location. Overall there is proficient use of the technical skills present, with some simple errors requiring further consideration, especially when completing the filming and post-production elements of the coursework task. There is no reason why you cannot build on this and develop further the technical competencies required.
Please ensure you each reflect on this feedback for your own personal development
Mr F