Shot of Frazer looking out the window is still too long.
Sound compression is off, sound effects too loud, backing track too quiet.
At the beginning the gun sound effects should start quiet and then start getting louder leading to an explosion, therefore him reacting in waking up.
George and Mariella's credits need to be added.
Film Industries need to be included at the start.
Personally, i don't like the sound of the tap before if comes on screen as it makes the footage look delayed.
The drowning sequence needs to still include the bucket clip which was included in our last demo instead of him being drowned from two different angles.
Still need audio to make him look out of the window.
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